The Thin Red Line
Hi Friends,
This is my second post, do read it and leave ur comments, wud be waiting for ur
comments.......
Cheers to Life,
Guru....
I see the thin red line,
As I now understand the difference,
Between the sea and the mountains.
Though the sky tells they are the same,
I cant as I'm not an Angel,
Who lives in the sky.
The earth does and there is where I stand,
Hence I see,
The thin red line between the sea and the mountains.
posted by Guru @ 2:05 PM
8 Comments:
hi da u have done a gud poem. keep on doing it.
I see the thin red line,
because i drank lots of whine!!..
As I now understand the difference,
Between the sea and the mountains.
after seeing beautiful fountains!!
Though the sky tells they are the same,
don't look at me i am not to blame!!
I cant as I'm not an Angel,
Who lives in the sky.
Because i am an ordinary mortal who eats chicken fry!!
The earth does and there is where I stand,
wearing a green rubber band!!
Hence I see,
The thin red line between the sea and the mountains.
after seeing beautiful fountains!
-- :-)
An attempt to poetry by :
Guru $ Ramya
Hey guru!
Man! u r getting to be a poet day by day, from the clouds to the mountains... ...as mallika put it, so much of thoughts nicely penned down.
Ramya and i were just attempting a poem for fun,
Later,
Guru & Ramya.
GURU,
red line which devides sea and mountains does mean any other thing pl let me .
The Thin Red Line...
Really awesome,Great thinking....gud going!! Carry on guru.That was short but a very sweet poem!!
gone above head.
rashmi & alok
"The Thin Red Line"
Nice one buddy, Down To Earth!
keep the poetry rockin like you are ;)
this one was really good. i enjoyed the beauty thru ur words.
srinivasan
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