Poems of a Poet ( Guru )

Poems that are meant to be there, that are meant to be read, that are meant to be pondered upon, that which leaves a fragrance of its own for being a poem, so very individual........

Thursday, April 27, 2006

To stop a cloud

Clouds that had to pass,
Have gone by,
Leaving me drenched,
Though as time passes by,
I would be dry again,
Now all that remains of me,
Is a thought,
If I had stopped that cloud.

19 Comments:

At 1:31 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Great...Go Ahead and Stop the Clouds...Just Kidding man....Keep on going

 
At 1:34 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

its such a meaning full poem which shows life goes on and memories are the only thing which alwayz linger on with u. i loved this

 
At 1:39 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is touchyy...

Good one.

 
At 1:41 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is touchy..

clouds...rains, stars and skies..
Reminds us of a higher power...


Good one Guru.

 
At 1:44 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...



"to stop the cloud...."



that was wonderful!! Great yaar!!just carry on!! Waiting for ur updates!!

 
At 1:50 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Good one... I really liked it.
Mmmm .... one day i should try writing poems, which r soo touching .

 
At 3:46 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice one.. It took me sometime to understand the deep meaning within.. I think the poet is very intellectual..

 
At 4:09 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

its very good Guru
poems on stars, sky i heard but on clouds i never heard thanks for such a good poem Guru

 
At 5:21 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Good One..Marvellous , Carry on..
All the Best...

 
At 10:21 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

annnnnnna.
aenti idi anna

 
At 5:05 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey guruP!

I did not know that you had a poet in you! :>

Really nice.

Guru.

 
At 5:12 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

very good
keep it up

 
At 7:35 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

good one.But i guess u wouldn't let us further into ur thoughts....

 
At 8:53 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Guru,
NICE PEOM,
to catch a thought so much simple and yet so immense on a passing cloud and pinning it down in ur words so lucidly is really GREAT job done
keep the good work
mallika

 
At 8:55 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Gupiya!!

good poem ra.

I was just wondering if u stopped the cloud, it can't pass by, and keep u drenched forever....just kidding....was a nice thought, if we can go back in time and change some of the things that are to happen in future, its interesting to look how the future would look like...

Shanku

 
At 3:24 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

keep on doing da. i'll wait 4 the next one. its nice to hear from u. and i wud request u to draw a poem on ATCE

 
At 2:20 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Guru,

This was nice poem.

 
At 9:01 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

good thought make it real!!


rashmi and alok

 
At 2:41 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi Guru
sorry to comment it. we cannot stop time, we need to be with it or above it. i feel the reality underneath it. good man try to keep up the pace.

regards

srinivasan

 

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