To stop a cloud
Clouds that had to pass,
Have gone by,
Leaving me drenched,
Though as time passes by,
I would be dry again,
Now all that remains of me,
Is a thought,
If I had stopped that cloud.
Poems that are meant to be there, that are meant to be read, that are meant to be pondered upon, that which leaves a fragrance of its own for being a poem, so very individual........
19 Comments:
Great...Go Ahead and Stop the Clouds...Just Kidding man....Keep on going
its such a meaning full poem which shows life goes on and memories are the only thing which alwayz linger on with u. i loved this
This is touchyy...
Good one.
This is touchy..
clouds...rains, stars and skies..
Reminds us of a higher power...
Good one Guru.
"to stop the cloud...."
that was wonderful!! Great yaar!!just carry on!! Waiting for ur updates!!
Good one... I really liked it.
Mmmm .... one day i should try writing poems, which r soo touching .
Nice one.. It took me sometime to understand the deep meaning within.. I think the poet is very intellectual..
its very good Guru
poems on stars, sky i heard but on clouds i never heard thanks for such a good poem Guru
Good One..Marvellous , Carry on..
All the Best...
annnnnnna.
aenti idi anna
Hey guruP!
I did not know that you had a poet in you! :>
Really nice.
Guru.
very good
keep it up
good one.But i guess u wouldn't let us further into ur thoughts....
Hi Guru,
NICE PEOM,
to catch a thought so much simple and yet so immense on a passing cloud and pinning it down in ur words so lucidly is really GREAT job done
keep the good work
mallika
Hey Gupiya!!
good poem ra.
I was just wondering if u stopped the cloud, it can't pass by, and keep u drenched forever....just kidding....was a nice thought, if we can go back in time and change some of the things that are to happen in future, its interesting to look how the future would look like...
Shanku
keep on doing da. i'll wait 4 the next one. its nice to hear from u. and i wud request u to draw a poem on ATCE
Hi Guru,
This was nice poem.
good thought make it real!!
rashmi and alok
hi Guru
sorry to comment it. we cannot stop time, we need to be with it or above it. i feel the reality underneath it. good man try to keep up the pace.
regards
srinivasan
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